Just finished reading your book. I certainly was taken on an adventure! 👀! I can see you are a librarian, you so cleverly, within your story, teach the young reader the different parts of a story book. Great educational tool. I also enjoyed your ‘make - up’ words like ‘bumpire,’  ‘kaboominator,’ ‘booktaphone,’ ‘McPharoah’s!’ 

The different fonts are great too. Our attention is captivated with the differences. I like Fred’s inner thoughts and how they are written in a different font. 

And as for the illustrations, well, they are so captivating and funny. This book will certainly attract the confident reader but it certainly will encourage the reader who will be attracted to the illustrations which there are so many, to help them advance successfully through the story. Lastly, Fred Do-It is a positive name, setting the pace for a positive story!! His plan doesn’t work but he learns to readjust his plans for a better outcome! Graham, a great story, full of action, with a hidden lesson. The art of reading for pleasure is so lost with the younger generations and this will captivate them as it is so modern with references to remotes which fast forward etc, and imaginary machines. 

I can only expect my grandsons to enjoy this book for all of the above and because the ‘ bum’ word is so liberally used. At their age this vocab is so funny, because they are boys and they enjoy this. 

I wish you all the very best and let this not be your only Fred Do-It book.

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